Rob Dalton
Title: Dir. of Business Development
Company: Big Belly Solar
The first thing we see when looking at Rob's profile is his apparent distaste for capital letters. In the professional world, presentation goes a long way, and Rob's profile looks like it was written without much care or attention to detail. His headline, "I've got a big belly," trivializes things.
Changing that to a more descriptive title would help those who don't know Rob get a better sense of who he is and what he does.
Still, Rob's profile has some very compelling data hiding beneath the rough presentation. He lists impressive accomplishments, and it's a shame that many interested parties may write him off simply due to the fact he writes in sentence fragments and doesn't capitalize.
Cleaning up the various elements would take his online professional identity to a whole new level.
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